Critique 2/18/11

I brought in a new installment of my thesis project for crit today. I'm not sure I got the feedback I was expecting as last time. I felt this time didn't help as much and I needed I guess? From last time I tried doing separate colors in each image instead of all together and I thought it was pretty successful but still missing something. I added two colors into one and still felt a little unsure about it. I definitely want to reshoot and try again. I was told that I should try to create a Pollock out of the colors and see if that does anything for me. What I am doing is definitely documenting gestures but is that what I am going for? I hope maybe when I get them printed the way I want it will then start falling all into place for me. Lets hope it works!